The problem continues.
There is nothing wrong with the photograph (the composition is a little sloppy, should have isolated the building more cleanly, etc) but it just doesn’t *say* anything. How many shots can i take that just are; that don’t reach out and shake you?
Just doing a Bernd & Hilla, to over come criticism with repetition (blah, blah, blah. i’m a fan, save it for someone else!) isn’t going to be at all satisfying. Perhaps the only answer is travel – to be somewhere with more chaos, less control…
It'll All End In Tears 
Did you get Tilt Shift Lens??
heh! nope, just a wide lens and standing in the right place… i probably tweaked the verticals a little in lightroom to get it “true”.
see you soon.
Soon!? When will you come?
Yep, soon. Will send mail.